Spot Illustration iterations

Version 1

I liked this design for the most part but the illustration at the top of the page just didn't flow so well with the rest and it also wasn't clear what the message was. It was supposed to show how the people of Myanmar are being ignored but I'm not sure a viewer would understand that so I decided to take a different approach. There is also something off about the layout but I haven't decided what that must be yet. 

Version 2

 
 In this second iteration I changed the top left illustration and I think this version is far better and has a clearer message. Now I have a nice trio of images that work well together connected by the people who are at the heart of this editorial. There is still something that needs changing about the layout before the final version.